The color of red that you chose for the hair is beautifully lush!
It looks like there are braids in the hair as well as the wrap around, however I can hardly see them. May be more visible when the photo is larger. I think by not being able to see them, it looks a bit off with the rest of the hair being smooth.

While the eyes are drawn right to the hair, I really love the make up. The mix of red and black eyeshadow is just wonderful!!
I like that the eyeshadow doesn't fill up the whole lid going to the brows.
Again, focus is the hair, but my favorite part of this photo is the beautiful work on the eyes. Great Job!